Feedback from Second Draft (during Half - Term)

Feedback that we got from Miss were things like;

• Have a shot of Mica crossing her legs when she sits down with a til going up because this reinforces the convention of the femme fetale in a film noir.


• Have an establishing shot of the diary (close-up).


• Have a point of view shot of diary opening.

other things as well such as;

• Make the deaths of the 3 men look like newspaper clipping.


• When she opens the book show the time. (this will be 10 minutes to 4, as 4 will be the time the conversation between the femme fetale [Mica] and the investigator will take place).


• Another change was that we should have the picture of the deaths in an envelope for the investigator also.

Below is the full structure of what the changes are.